After a very turbulent process, Quinn, Nico, and I got together to fix the script.
We decided to shave off the extra couple of characters and focus a lot more on Sarina. We decided to make the fix because we thought the cast would get too bloated, and with 4 characters that already need developing, any way to shave off a few would really help. This also means we kind of had to shoehorn in some VO and void scenes to explain Sarina and Claire's relationship, but I think it works. We also made the void a more pivotal plot device, having it represent Claire's mind. Claire and Sarina's relationship also gives a bit more of an emotional backbone to the story, and also gives us an easy out to explain how the witches are defeated (power of friendship with yet another win).
I think this was the best we could get out of the script, so enjoy.
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